Gardens in bloom
Sun worshippers galore
Summer sunshine warming hearts.
My first attempt at Haiku for this week’s prompt at Write Tribe.
Edited to add: Meena, picture added. Thank you 🙂
Gardens in bloom
Sun worshippers galore
Summer sunshine warming hearts.
My first attempt at Haiku for this week’s prompt at Write Tribe.
Edited to add: Meena, picture added. Thank you 🙂
U should hv added a pic to go along…..
Oh oh. Let me do that as soon as I get home.
That’s a fab first attempt, Smitha.
Thanks loads, Shilpa!
I don’t know how to appreciate a poetry..but I liked yours!
I’m no good at poetry either. I loved the ones I learnt at school. But that was because the teachers did such a fantastic job interpreting them:) Thanks:)
Lovely. I love getting so many glimpses of beautiful nature through haiku poetry.
This is beautiful, Smitha – both the picture and the haiku! 🙂
wow!! Fab first attempt!!
The pic is beautiful too!!
I’m struggling with it! 😦
Good one 🙂
And such pretty roses there!
Kya baat hain! And you were asking about my feet?!! Lovely imagery!!
That is a fantastic first attempt ! Creates a perfect imagery of a bright sunny day !
I would love to see you do a Haiku on Rains !
If I may suggest something.. how about using another word/phrase instead of using both sun and sunshine ?
I will give it a try, Ruchira! Let me try one on summer without sun and sunshine and one on the rains. Thank you so much for the feedback. Your tutorial was so good, that I gathered the courage to try.
Bfully expressed Smitha 🙂
I must think on writing a haiku
sigh
This is really impressive!! Does not look like a maiden effort.
It’s a treat to read all the haiku’s in this challenge.
First attempt! this is a very nice one. The image of summer was loud and clear and yet a scene far away from me (monsoon over north india 😀 )
Richa
You achieved the WOW factor!!! Brilliant!
Kathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
I really loved yours……even I attempted for the first time…interesting
Thank you:) Will hop over to yours.
lovely beautiful flower….